Saturday, May 9, 2009

Wistful

turn face to sunshine
lean forward, touch reflection
wistful gaze, full heart


5 comments:

  1. Lovely poem- I can just picture what you describe. I really love the poetic form of haiku. It has a definite structure that is simple, allowing the beauty of the words to shine through. I consider it the "instant gratification" of poetry forms!

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  2. I know! I like haiku, too. It gives you a format to do the "less is more" and let others interpret. I loved the reflections of the primroses and when I took the picture, they looked like they were sad and wanting to be outside...like me. :-)

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  3. I loved the poem too, it perfectly described the scene for me : )
    I love this shot too, and was wondering if I could take a stab at tweaking it?
    Thanks : )

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  4. Yes, please tweak and tell me what you did.

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  5. ...simply beautiful & softly powerful... :)

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